The Writings and Musings of B.A. Matthews

Musing about the words… Dual Melodies: Chapter 1, Part 1

This area is dedicated to comments about the first Chapter (Part1) of Dual Melodies.  Questions and comments are encouraged!



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7 Responses to “Musing about the words… Dual Melodies: Chapter 1, Part 1”

  1. Pamela Says:

    I enjoyed this part quite a bit. It’s a bit darker than I typically read, but I’m finding it interesting.

  2. Blaze Says:

    I can’t lie, Dual Melodies is a very dark fantasy, but I don’t stay in “Dark” forever. Part 2 is much lighter, dealing with characters that haven’t had to lead such a dark life. The story will bounce from fantasy to dark fantasy for probably another chapter before it levels out. I felt it was necessary to show the reader (after that brutal first chapter) that the entire book wouldn’t follow just that level of hardness.

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